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{悠情优译}I'll have to say I love u in a song2008.08.21 20:09:00
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夜深人俱寂
       Well, I know it's kind of late
缱绻意难息
       I hope I didn't wake you
谷应山鸣和
       But what I got to say can't wait
郎情妾心知?
   I know you'd understand
悠悠迟锦鲤
       'Cause every time I tried to tell you
切切复相思
       The words just came out wrong
怎把灵犀点?
   So I'll have to say I love you in a song
低吟浅唱系


始解情何物       Yeah, I know it's kind of strange
婷婷遇子初
       But every time I'm near you
言行皆失措
       I just run out of things to say
坐卧总难舒
       I know you'd understand
不畏屈膝礼
       'Cause every time I tried to tell you
唯求展袖扶
       The words just came out wrong
怎将心意表?
   So I'll have to say I love you in a song
浅唱婉吟出


流年常难握       'Cause Every time the time was right
岁月总蹉跎
       All the words just came out wrong
莫把衷情负
       So I'll have to say I love you in a song
低吟伴瑟拨


夜深人俱寂       Well, I know it's kind of late
缱绻意难息
       I hope I didn't wake you
谷应山鸣和
       But what I got to say can't wait
郎情妾心知?
   I know you'd understand
悠悠迟锦鲤
       'Cause every time I tried to tell you
切切复相思
       The words just came out wrong
怎把灵犀点?
   So I'll have to say I love you in a song
低吟浅唱系



     好像对将西文歌词译成格律诗的行为有点小上瘾,尽管我本身是不通格律的,真得是非常努力地在模仿。平仄、韵律、对仗不工整的地方,大家不用包涵,多多指教哦~
    实在觉得我的行为无聊的朋友们,这首老歌至少是动听的,enjoy!开心每一天哦~

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